Anyone want to read my short story? Tell me your opinions. I'm 15.Its called 'simply the truth'?

subject matter and style not bad - If you are serious about writing more, here is my two cents worth of advice: Open your spellchecker settings menu and turn on everything for detection including all grammar and style. Even if you reject some of the suggestions in favour of your style, through repetition of the exercise, you learn a lot about sentence structure, technicalities, etc. But having said all that, for 15 yrs old, it's also pretty decent technically. Well done. I encourage you to do more if it interests you. If you are up to it, maybe you might inspect my work sometime at www.nokilleye.com (see 'Erdman Gallery') and post a comment.