What Do You Think Of This Poem? I Wrote Myself But Not Sure If Its Good!?

This poem has definite potential. However, there are a few problems. Your rhyme scheme is erratic and even nonexistent in the last three stanzas. You may need to consider whether you want it to rhyme or not at all. Meter could use a little tweaking too. There are some spelling and punctuation issues as well. These are all easily fixed though. Despite all this, the content is good. Maybe a little overused, but the fact that your protagonist reconsiders her actions in the end is very refreshing and true. She came to realize what very few a willing to see. Sounds like it was written from the heart and with some first hand knowledge. Keep writing...you have talent.